Barcelona,Spain was a place I visited in 2002. Although I visited there for a very short period of time, I had the greatest time of my life. I went with my mom, my grandmother, my grandfather, who sadly past-away(sp.) two years ago, and my two uncles from my mother's side. This place is very special to me because its some of the most meaningfull memories I have of my grandfather(phr.), who I miss very much. I didnt get to see him much because I lived in New York, but everytime I visited he was so exited to see me as I was also.


We stayed there for a week, but the places we visited were ones i would never forget. There were places that were around 20 stories high and the architecture was very old fashioned. A very old fasioned place would be the "Sagrada Familia" which was unfinished until today, i believe it was left like that for a reason. I also ended up visiting a place which i never thought i would visit which was the Picasso Museum. Later that day we went to eat at this really interesting restaurant, the food was amazing! To tell you the truth, finding a place to eat was not so easy because my uncle who is religious always needs to eat at kosher places and i wasnt really into that stuff back then so i had to sort of sneak out to eat at other places. We also went up this mountain and my grandfather couldnt go up because he wasnt feeling so great, i still remember that until today because he said he would wait and we came back down after two hours and he was still there.


Overall my trip to Barcelona,Spain was amazing. I wish sometime in the near future i could go again with different people and different places because every year i hear new things. There are so many places in this world that if you visit, the memories will stay forever, Barcelona will always stay in my mind.

You've corrected most of your mistakes. I left marked in red the last mistakes. Other than that, your work is very nice and I enjoyed reading it very much.
Daphna.